Friday, February 25, 2005
I was ....

I was sort of hoping,
That you would come along,
Like the answer to a prayer,
And the music to a song.

Like the kind of thing that happens,
At a special place and time,
That will change our lives forever,
Like a fantasy of mine.

The fantasy was there before,
I ever knew your name,
And now that I have found you,
We will never be the same.

So, pardon, if I look at you,
Forgive me if I stare,
At the fantasy I knew before,
I saw you standing there.

For I was always hoping,
That you would come along,
Like the answer to a prayer,
And the music to a song

- Rachel –


Posted at 09:38 pm by san1378

zack
October 30, 2007   05:18 AM PDT
 
absolutely brilliant poem its really touching specially me am going to send his poem to a new lover of mine
andrewsgirl
June 15, 2006   04:33 AM PDT
 
i love it! this is straight to the point and the more you read the deeper it gets. by the time the end comes you don't want out!
Vicky
January 18, 2006   01:34 AM PST
 
Totally cute poem...kinda simple but to the point. Great job!
Patreice
June 16, 2005   06:35 AM PDT
 
That was a great poem!
miguel
April 4, 2005   02:11 PM PDT
 
i loved ur poem ur a good writer
 

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